Hunted – #05 Hunted – #05 published on November 10th, 2021Read more posts by the author of Hunted – #05, Sage9 Comments on Hunted – #05 I like having a speech bubble just to represent someone saying nothing.
Speechlessss????? That’s a first.
It’s not traditional to have someone say nothing like that, but one of my more favored writers (and friend) does it enough to have made it grow on me.
Explore, play, bend rules a little. Language changes over time, and so too can the writing of it.
Also, good on Aiya to realize she might have messed up a little. Growth, even if you had to have it reinforced by an authority figure, is always good.
Oh, meant to add that I love Kaylin’s ears folding down a little when she was concerned there. Nice little touch to have elven ears conveying emotion.
and I was here with a … pair of breasts
(or amnesia, but it’s less funny)
A… splitting [personalities] headache? Or maybe Aggression… after all, she beat up a guy without even remembering it the next day.
i kind of like how there is no speech in a speech bubble, sometimes silence with no bubble gets me a bit confused for a second and then i figure it out
not only that, but it just goes to show the emotions more with whatever emotion is happening at that very moment, sometimes showing nothing like that can really set the mood with what youre trying to go for
Really is striking how much Aiya has… left an impression on Kaylin, and yet Aiya is nowhere near the top of the food chain so to speak, between Kaala and Elli. Sena too, given Kaala implied Sena outclasses Aiya. Really feels like Kaylin is in a shark tank here, and sure is fortunate the sharks seem friendly.