Secret team-up, unfair double teaming very effective.
Artificial Incident
Secret team-up, unfair double teaming very effective.
Panel four seems to be missing a word
“a guard captain overlook such a thing”
seems it should have a “can” at the start or at least be “overlooking” to imply a tone of mocking or implied disappointment.
No, I think you’ll find it works grammatically as it is.
You can also explain it by Nyna not using her native language.
I mentally put in a comma after “captain”, but I’m prone to, well, many commas….I fully believe you that it’s grammatically correct without, but I think it reads easier with.
Kaylin and Nyna have become an EXCELLENT “good cop, bad cop” team by now, really nice to see them working together in such a manner.
“unfair double teaming very effective.” . . .For some reason I have DBZA Nail in my head saying that sounds Dirty, is that weird?
Smaal user feedback. Reading these (both of them) comics on a phone screen is… Straining
If at all possible have a “phone” version of the page where the comic page is “edge to edge” and as convenient it is for next page to just click the image so does it atm get “dark/dimmed” and I am not sure why. It seems as if it is 3 different fields for “next page”
This is mostly an issue when I read page after page after page and have to zoom in all the time, gets a little fiddly as i accidentally change page or just “makes it to dark to read”.
On other news, your art and art style has improved alot since 2007 so gratulations on being “practice makes perfection” personified
tactics
The sass is strong with this one.
….in case there weren’t enough reasons to like her…