Halfway point for the chapter! This one is packed and I feel like I cut a lot o_o;
Artificial Incident
Halfway point for the chapter! This one is packed and I feel like I cut a lot o_o;
it doesn’t feel like it has been to aggressively cut or like it is missing anything so that’s always a good thing
Meaningful looks and implied ‘others’ make this an interesting page indeed. Asking about ‘her little girl and her friend’ has a dangerous edge to it – I parse it as a spike in protectiveness toward Nyna and wanting to remove Kaylin.
I also think Aiya turned out interestingly in panel 4 – I know she is looking down so perspective is involved, but the increased roundness to cheek and chin along with the larger eyes makes her briefly look much younger. Babyface Aiya? But she’s back to being her self-assured adult self by the end of the page.
now im just imagining a third PC showing up, one who was big into raiding. “oh yeah i killed that boss a few times, it was real tough and fun!” “killed a few times?!”